Sunday, April 6, 2008

MR . PAUL'S ACCESS

hi mr paul. you can send me posts by commenting in here.
faris

2 comments:

My P4 class said...

Faris,

You raised a good point. Yes the punishment did not fit the crime and was quite cruel.

Watch your spelling.....crule. Don't forget, the title of the text should be underlined.

Mr. Paul

My P4 class said...

Faris,

Good that you picked up on the order of words in the sentence. Keep working at this. Don't forget though, there is still complex language about today.